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  • Like a lot writers, I keep a file of story ideas.  Actually, I keep two–one for SF and fantasy ideas, and one for interesting nonspeculative storylines/scenarios that might serve as the scaffolding for a SF or fantasy idea.  Even if I write until I’m 100, I won’t have time to turn them all into stories or novels.  Each time I start something new, I have to make choices, and one of the choice points is, do I write what I want to write most, or do I write what I think is likely to be popular?  It’s never quite that straightforward, and often if you’re excited about an idea, readers are likely to respond enthusiastically as well.  But, feet to the fire, if I have to lean one way or the other?  Easy.  I write what I think is likely to be popular.

    There are unflattering words we sometimes ascribe to writers who make the choice to write based on what they think will sell, but let me elaborate on my thinking.

    Over the years I’ve often heard or read this piece of advice: write what you love.  The thing is, some of the things I love most are things most readers wouldn’t find all that interesting.  For example, I am fascinated by collecting, and would love to write something that centers around collecting.  I’m an avid collector.  Original comic art is first and foremost, as might be evident by my new novel Hitchers, but at one time or another I’ve collected autographs, baseball cards, movie posters, first edition SF books and more.  Over time I’ve learned that unless you’re talking to another collector, never, ever talk about collecting.  Only other collectors find collecting interesting; everyone else’s eyes glaze over in a hurry if you bring up collecting.  Now, I’m sure it’s possible to write a stunning novel that centers around collecting (there may even be some are out there), but it would be an uphill battle.

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  • The title for this piece comes from one of my favorite movies, YOUNG FRANKENSTEIN. It’s in the scene where the junior Dr. Frankenstein (played by the great Gene Wilder) discovers his infamous grandfather’s secret book, which holds the key to reanimating the dead. The title of that ominously dusty tome is so literal it’s funny:  HOW I DID IT.

    If only it were that easy.

    One thing I’ve learned from writing novels is that such a how-to manual is impossible. For fiction to be truly worthwhile, it must be the product of long reflection, painful experimentation, a lifetime of experience distilled into the best story anybody ever wrote – or so the author should believe.

    There is no shortcut.

    As a reader, I don’t want the literary equivalent of junk food; I want soul food. I want to know I’m reading the agony and the ecstasy of a true believer, whose purpose in life was to write that novel.

    This applies whether a book is comedy or tragedy – it just has to be a labor of love and hard-earned skills. No matter the genre, every novel should stand alone, a monument to the author’s tortured psyche. If a book exists merely to fit a popular publishing niche, and its author has no ambition beyond repeating the generic tropes, it doesn’t deserve to be called a “novel.” Novel means original.

    Maybe I’m crazy.

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  • How do I decide what I are going to write?

    It depends.

    Left on my own recognizance, I make very little calculation about it. I have never been one of those writers who thinks about what is currently popular when planning his next book. I’m not a bandwagon jumper. Inspiration strikes, I jot down the idea, and after a while, if I can find the time and a good hook, I might expand it into a book.

    Jane Carver of Waar, for example, was, despite what you might think, all inspiration and no calculation. I didn’t write it because the John Carter movie was coming out. I wrote it ten years ago when there wasn’t even a whiff of Barsoom in the air, just because I liked the idea. It might have sold because the John Carter movie is coming out, but that’s a different story, and not mine to tell. (more…)

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  • Once upon a time a creative writing teacher told me that all stories had to have outlines. As a result, I thought I couldn’t be a writer because I have a very difficult time working with outlines. My brain simply doesn’t work that way. Years and years passed before I discovered that writers work in all sorts of different ways, and they’re all valid. (If someone tells you there’s only one way to write — run, don’t walk to the exit.) Also? I’ve written six novels so far, and every novel is a bit different from the last one. (Some are more different than others.) You’re working with your subconscious, and your subconscious sometimes can get a bit tricksy with you because… well… everyone has their insecurities. (Get used to it. You’ll be facing them every time you look at a blank page or computer screen.)

    That said, I’m an organic writer for the most part. I get a scene in my head and then I follow the characters around until things start to jell. That’s what it feels like. I’m spying on my characters and jotting down the things they say. Sometimes I get ideas ahead of time for how things should work, and I write those down. Once it’s down on paper or in the computer, I can safely think about other things. Often, my husband and I go on long walks around the neighborhood and talk about the story. He’s not only my alpha reader, but my idea wall — I bounce ideas off him. (I can tell you the neighbors have given us an odd look or three. Oh, the conversations we’ve had in public.) The thing to remember is that writing is in the re-writing. Type whatever comes to mind. Polish it later. It’s okay to suck. Just write. Eventually, I end up with enough to stop and plan. (Usually, this is the famous “middle muddle.”) Where is the story headed? Where does it need to go? What do the characters want? What best serves the story? That’s when the planning comes in. I need to know what the ending is before I get there. That said, sometimes the characters throw me for a loop and that’s the fun part. I know I’m in a good place when that happens.

    Books are different than short stories, by the way. I have to know everything about a short story before I start writing, and I guess that’s why I don’t write them often, but they’re great practice. They make you focus on the ending. Most beginners focus on writing beginnings over and over and hardly ever write endings. That’s why endings — good endings are hard.

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  • The way I see it, creating a book from inspiration means you’re a writer. Creating a book from calculation means you’re an author…sooner or later.
    I happily wrote romance novels for years. My stories and characters were a little offbeat and unusual, I suspect, but Harlequin/Silhouette took a chance with me and I got a few published books under my belt. I was asked on two different occasions to be part of series involving established authors whose work I admired. My most recent Silhouette novel sold out of its print run.
    But after that, I couldn’t buy a contract.
    Everything I wrote was off the mark. My wonderful editor seemed surprised at my sudden incapacity to come up with a workable story. I submitted proposal after proposal—some rejected outright, and some rejected after several overhauls. I was confused and disappointed and upset. I’d thought, after several books, that I was a sure thing, and I discovered I really, really wasn’t.
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  • I feel like I’m full of soup. Possibly also something else beginning with S, but definitely soup. It sloshes around inside me when I walk. It’s made up of bits of  everything I am. All the memories and relationships, all the music and reading and experiences and obsessions and loves and hates and hopes, that I’ve known. Then, like the arm of a jukebox when a coin is inserted, something reaches down into that soup and plucks out a combination of bits to make a book. Is the combination random or deliberate? And is the coin Inspiration? And is this becoming a clumsy mixed metaphor or what?

    I don’t know where it comes from, or if Inspiration is too grand a word for it, but I do know it when it comes. I can clearly remember the day when the arm of the jukebox reached down and pulled out the combination of bits that became the premise of my first novel, FAITH.

    There were some books and films which I’d carried in my head for years and which obviously supplied some of FAITH’s building-blocks: Moby Dick, Kafka’s The Trial, Duel. There was a particular day when all of that, and several other things, combined and recombined and gave me the premise of a novel: the meeting of two apparently invincible opponents. Of two ships, one of human origin and one unknown, locked together in a battle that almost tears space-time around them. This wasn’t the first time a possible premise for a book had flitted through my mind, but it was the first time I absolutely knew it was viable. Almost before I’d finished thinking of the premise I was plotting the details.

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  • Inspiration is a tricky thing, and unfortunately I can’t write without it. What hooks me as a writer – and hopefully hooks my readers when I’m done –  is a character. Perhaps that comes from roleplaying a person I’m not every Friday night; perhaps it’s how I’m wired. But I need to be struck by a character and his or her situation, to want to explore that, before I can write anything interesting.

    Usually inspiration occurs when I am reading a history book and some side character is mentioned – an emperor who started out imprisoned or a general’s wife known for meddling. Without fail I begin thinking about what it was like to be that person, the side character, the one caught up in events, the person thrown into the pool who had to learn to swim. (more…)

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